This page is a mess, as you've implied, Siberian99. I think it would be better just to re-write it entirely.
Basic Information, according to whomever wrote it, covers almost every single thing about the character. I believe there should be an overview at the top, followed by Physical Appearance, followed by Personality, followed by Abilities, instead of this "Basic Information" stuff.
I also believe we should eliminate the specific incidences. For example, in the film, Frylock is a female. While this could potentially be canon, I think it's too specific an incidence. Besides, this is contradicted in "Chick Magnet," where Frylock becomes upset that he starts acting like a woman.
Furthermore, talking about his scar in "Baffler Meal " and his being played by T-Pain is almost completely unnecessary. If canon is light and non-canon is dark, "Baffler Meal" would be as black as coal. It should be listed under the "Trivia" section. His eye-removal in "Baffler Meal" and being played by T-Pain is incredibly short to the point of it being choppily added. They are also irrelevant to the canon Frylock (if there is one).
Moreover, the gallery on this page is a little excessive. Do we really need a picture of "Zombie Frylock" on this page. Three of the photos show more focus on the Danger Cart Frylock. I can guarantee you that when I was uploading that thumbnail for "Muscles," I didn't intend for it to be used on this page.
In closing, I can certainly see why you want this page revised. If you see any other problems with this page, point it out at any point on Thursday or on Friday morning, as I will be revising this page over the weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Edd Shwartz (talk) 03:47, November 7, 2013 (UTC)Edd Shwartz
- Agreed, the page is a mess. Here is how I think the page should be formatted:
- Opening
- Physical Appearance - Brief description of his design, mentioning his various features (like the crystal on his back and his tendency to use his french fries as legs or arms).
- Personality - Self explanatory.
- Abilities - His various powers. I believe that the "vision" pages that have been created should be condensed here.
- Relationships - This is something I'd like to be done for all four of the main characters. Meatwad has a relationship section, but it's pretty bare-bones.
- Most of the trivia seems alright to me, though the part about him dying is not relevant anymore. As it is not canon, I think that it should mentioned in the trivia that Frylock may be transsexual, supported by the various times he is seen being feminine throughout the series and him admitting in the movie that he is a, "woman trapped inside of a man's body". Siberian99 (talk) 06:09, November 7, 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, I was thinking about making a "Relationships" section, but I forgot to mention it in the earlier post. I'll try to find time to revise the page today, but I likely won't be able to, and I definitely wouldn't be able to finish it today. Also, I'll be publishing the revisions piece by peice when I do find time. I would be adsolutely peeved if I finished the page after three hours of work, then discovered that the internet went out and I had to start over. Edd Shwartz (talk) 16:42, November 7, 2013 (UTC)Edd Shwartz
Well, I Got Some Free Time[]
I'll begin the process of this re-writing this page. I managed to type out the text on a word processor throughout today, but I cannot copy and paste onto this wiki without it changing the font. I can't change the font on my computer, because I don't know which font Wikia uses, and every time I try to copy information from Wikia, a strange options menu comes up with the only option being "paste" which isn't helpful at all. I will start doing this process, an "Operation R.E.W.R.I.T.E." if you will, piece by piece to avoid losing all of my work, as I will have to paste the contents, then rewrite it all with the proper formatting. I may have to quit tonight, and finish it sometime tomorrow. As Siberian99 and I agreed, Trivia shall remain, but I may edit it, as it says that Frylock has never died once, then goes on about his four deaths. Best Wishes, Edd Shwartz (talk) 02:09, November 8, 2013 (UTC)Edd Shwartz
Well, I had no idea until now how nice Source mode can be. I managed to copy and paste everything and still eliminate that complex font. This marks my first time prominantly using source mode.
I understand that this wiki is a group effort and that I do not own this page. Therefore, Siberian99 (I can only assume you're the only one reading this), if there is something off about this page, either fix it or tell me what's wrong. Also, I'll add more links tomorrow, as my free time is running low tonight. Edd Shwartz (talk) 02:53, November 8, 2013 (UTC)Edd Shwartz
- Yeah, I would suggest using source mode as much as possible. While useful, visual mode can also be extremely annoying when you're trying to thoroughly fix up a page.
- I took a look at the page and fixed what I thought needed to be fixed. I also added the gallery back in after heavily pruning the unnecessary ones. I would suggest looking over the Meatwad section of the relationship part, though. The part about the brain seems to be largely irrelevant, and it's jarring going from saying that Frylock looks out for his best interests to Frylock encouraging him to roll around in broken glass.
- Great job though, it looks a lot cleaner than it did before. Thank you very much for all the effort you put into this page. Siberian99 (talk) 04:38, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, I must agree with you about that part of Frylock's relationship with Meatwad. I'll revise that. I'll be posting my suggestions about what to do with Carl and Meatwad sometime today. Thank you for the edits to my hard work. Sometimes I just can't reach that level of excellence that I so crave. However, I must ask: did I accidentally delete the Trivia section. When I compare my revision and the revision you just made, it states that you added Triva, but when I click on "Last Revision by Edd Shwartz" the Trivia is still there. I suppose it could just be a computer glitch, but I still felt like asking. Edd Shwartz (talk) 21:49, November 8, 2013 (UTC)Edd Shwartz